Have updated the characters a bit based on some of the feedback from Rethink and others. (Erik will be pleased to see the dad has benefited from a month with Jenny Craig!).
If only it were that easy in real life! I think it also takes a few years off of him too. All good. Took a second to really look at Charlotte again - love her! Someone today mentioned the heart on her sweater - I really like that. It reminds me that while I was writing I had a paper stuck above my computer "Give a story that models love" - maybe cheezy, but I like that the heart on her shirt implies that too.
If only it were that easy in real life! I think it also takes a few years off of him too. All good. Took a second to really look at Charlotte again - love her! Someone today mentioned the heart on her sweater - I really like that. It reminds me that while I was writing I had a paper stuck above my computer "Give a story that models love" - maybe cheezy, but I like that the heart on her shirt implies that too.
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